Like how ya mixed in all the disney refferences and there were some funny jokes with the youngest being call Rubber, that made me grin. And the twist with the pig at the end was really suprising!
the only suggestion i can think of to make is to consider giving Percy a bit more time at the start of the story, maybe have him involved in getting the ducks to come to the party so he deserves being spitted at the end?
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